Make ‘Em Beg to Talk With You When Seeking that Dream Job

Written by Michael on July 2, 2008 – 5:00 am -

I’m involved with recruiting over at InfoSource Learning.

Every month we receive a few hundred resumes.

And, we look at ‘em all.

Some closely, but most for mere seconds.

What’s the single fastest way you can get your resume tossed into the “doesn’t fit” box?

Failing to tell the recruiter why you’re right for the job.

Yet, most resumes come in without a note, without a letter, or any other hint or clue that helps us quickly determine if there’s a fit.

Am I too old school?  Sheesh, dunno, but I sure think that you’d want to pull out all the stops when trying to connect with an impress a prospective employer.

Blasting out resumes and making the recipient guess at the fit simply doesn’t work.  Period.

The below is a real intro note we received earlier today from someone with both BA and MBA degrees who was applying for one of our educational sales positions.

I am seeking a Professional Position with your organization that will allow me to utilize my analytical, organizational and planning skills that I have developed over the years. I am looking for a position that will afford me the opportunity to make use of my problem solving abilities in handling sensitive and confidential information. As a professional Educator, strong communicational skills both written and oral were developed over the years. This coupled, with my ability to multitask in a fast pace environment is one of my predominant strengths.  I have been blessed with the ability to interact with all levels of management.  During my educational career, I have had the opportunity to interact with 5 different school Superintendents, Administrators, Principal, Teachers, Resource Personnel, parents and students.  I believe this experience will make me a valuable part of your Human Resource Team.
 
Although I lack specific Human Resource experience, I am confident that my experience coupled with my MBA Degree will make me a valuable asset to your organization.

Do you know how many thousands of letters we’ve received over the years that look just about like that one?

Well, sir, that all looks great . . . but have you ever sold anything?  Why would you make a great sales person for us even though you’ve never sold anything?  And, since you want to work on our Human Resource Team, might you know if we have an opening there?  (Oh, yeah, and your communicational skills are right up there with the best of ‘em.)

Trash can.

Next?

Share This

Popularity: 42% [?]


Posted in Hands On, Real-World Stories |

5 Comments to “Make ‘Em Beg to Talk With You When Seeking that Dream Job”

  1. mind cooker Says:

    Maybe you should bring back the part where viable candidates call in and leave a voicemail pitch…

    “Think” the flux capacitor.

  2. Mary Says:

    I’m sorry but this really put me off. I found the tone mocking and sarcastic and would have preferred an article which showed, yes, a bulky and awkward letter which speaks for (or rather against) itself, followed by an GOOD example. It’s too early in the day and too far into the recession to deal with this snide tone.

  3. Olaitan Says:

    Would you show a letter that would cause you to look at the resume?

  4. Michael Says:

    @Olaitan and Mary: I’ll look for some good letters and post them. Good idea. In general, here are things I’d look for:

    1. You show a basic understanding of my business or organization. No, you don’t have to know it intimately (how could you?), but you should know basically about my industry and what we offer.

    2. You match your skill set to the position opening. If the job posting adequately explains the position (granted, many don’t, and shame on those companies who can’t post a good description), then what are the SPECIFIC experiences you’ve had that match the description.

    3. There’s a HUMAN BEING behind the resume. Send a note or letter along with it to tell us what makes you tick, what you’re really looking for in an organization, and what makes you a qualified candidate.

    @Mary. Yikes, had no intent to offend; was simply trying to offer up an example of what NOT to do. You’re right, though — I should (and will) show some good letters.

    Unfortunately, most companies (and especially today!) are overwhelmed with candidates, so the job applicant needs to spend more time simply to get noticed. Blasting out generic resumes and letters won’t cut it.

  5. Mombu.com Says:

    Dream Jobs Dialog :
    We found the information you post really useful, and we decided to make a review about it in our website.
    You can check it out at : http://www.mombu.com/jobs/jobs/t-mombu-recommends-dream-jobs-dialog-1674194.html#post6436102
    Our score is : 8.8

Leave a Comment

*
To prove you're a person (not a spam script), type the security word shown in the picture.
Anti-Spam Image

RSS